CHAPTER ONE REVAMP!

Ok so as promised I have taken Chapter one down and Gave it a bit of a revamp. its a bit long now, might spread it out into chapter two. the chapter has all the same major plot lines with the exception of the addition of the source of spells which I have added to explain the difference between Mages and sorcerers, I didnt want to go down the blood magic route... I think its been done to death. Well I am going to redo chapter two as well with the hope they will match up witht he later chapters.

Shaun 

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