Finally!

Well as I said in the last posts I have had some serious problems with getting the emotional intensity across, but under some advice I decided to get it finished so I could continue with the story so I could then go back later and change any parts I don't like enough.

So I have charged through the emotional barrier ;)

so hopefully i can get some more progress done!!!!!!!!!!!
So back to harassing everyone :D

thanks

 Shaun
:D